You are organising a graduation party for your class and you want to book a restaurant.
Write a letter to the manager of your favourite restaurant. In the letter:
• explain the reason for the party and the date and time it will be held
• describe some particular food you would like to be served
• say how many people will be attending and what their dietary requirements are
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to reserve a restaurant for organising college graduation party.
We would like to book your roof top restaurant “Skyy” on 26th July 2019 from 7pm till 11pm, on the occasion of send off party.
In our college, there are students from Japan, so I would like to inculcate some Sushi food in the menu. I am aware that Indian snacks counter is available only for Sunday Brunch, but it would be greatful if you could arrange that counter for us, as we are hosting party on weekday and many of us want to taste it.
There are 60 people who will be attending the party but around 10 people prefer Jain food, so I would request you to setup similar buffet menu on different counter specifically for them. I would like to know the availability of the restaurant for that day and the payment terms. Let us know, if we need to deposit some amount prior to the arrival. If possible, I would request you to provide some discount as it is a bulk booking.
I will be waiting for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Tim Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 115, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...refer Jain food, so I would request you to setup similar buffet menu on different counte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56345177665 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5233175257 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0931368351 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255781890762 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996872668095 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664187982734 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148216513172 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628018595665 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.