There are fewer controls on the designs and construction of a home and office buildings. So, people can build them whatever they like.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It has often been argued that there are less than enough regulations on the structure and building aspects of residential and work premises, and this gives people the flexibility to build as per their will. I believe the benefit of better space utilization is clearly outweighed by the drawback of rising in the illegal constructions.
The primary advantage of lesser rules for construction of buildings is that people could use their spaces as per their need. This allows them the flexibility to plan the size of each room according to their future needs, and thus they could design the structure of their offices or homes in a way that people working or living in these buildings will benefit, in terms of comfort, the most. In India, for example, most builders today can sell apartments of customers’ choices due to the less stringent government controls for constructing buildings. But, this benefit is less significant as it persuades some people to deviate with even these relaxed rules.
However, these relaxed regulations are disadvantageous as many corrupt business people would take advantages of them in an illegal way. Not only this, but also they would construct their buildings by covering the land of other innocent people as states rules are not rigid enough to restrict them from doing so, and as a result, both good citizens and governments would suffer losses. In Gujarat, for instance, many cases of illegal constructions are being reported in the newspaper, called Times of India, almost every day as the State regulations are such liberal that any business minded person can manipulate.
In conclusion, although lesser laws for building different premises are beneficial in terms of flexibility to design the construction, I would argue that the disadvantage of increase in unlawful constructions is more significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an illegal way" with adverb for "illegal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ss people would take advantages of them in an illegal way. Not only this, but also they would con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24242424242 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91858020224 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.421656417 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.7 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314437972553 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10960625447 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497554370056 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16519216033 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582066134511 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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