An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What are the causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?
More and more professionals are going to developed countries by leaving their home country to get more wages.The major causes of this problem is the opportunity to earn more and the viable solution is that their government should encourage them to work for their nation by providing them a good facilities and more pays.
The main causes of this problem is in their poor country they gets less pays for their work and for that same work they gets huge salaries in developed countries because of shortage of professional in their country.So all the doctors and teachers wants to move to foreign nations to get a good looking lifestyles which they can not get in their home country.For example,a research by Delhi University states that from the past twenty years,30 percent of Indian doctors and 40 percent of teachers moved to European countries in the thought of getting luxury lifestyle
The viable solution to this is government should provide free services to them like public transport, health insurance and no tax on income.This step can change their mind to not going to other countries to left their home because if they can save more in the same wages and gets a good services for free then they can stay in their own country.Every individual wants to save more for their family and if they can save more for their future then they did not think about settling in another nation.For Example, a similar initiative by Japan government did in 2001 and after that year there is continuously reduction in the moving of other countries of their people.
In conclusion,despite the fact that less payscale and more taxes by their own country encourage people to move to developed nations is the main causes and it can be easily solved if government took some positive steps like good service without any charge and no taxes on income earned by them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'develop'
Suggestion: develop
...ore and more professionals are going to developed countries by leaving their home country...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ng their home country to get more wages.The major causes of this problem is the opp...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...s problem is in their poor country they gets less pays for their work and for that s...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun pays is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...blem is in their poor country they gets less pays for their work and for that same w...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
... their work and for that same work they gets huge salaries in developed countries be...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ortage of professional in their country.So all the doctors and teachers wants to m...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lifestyle'?
Suggestion: lifestyle
...o foreign nations to get a good looking lifestyles which they can not get in their home co...
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Suggestion: For
... they can not get in their home country.For example,a research by Delhi University ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...ot get in their home country.For example,a research by Delhi University states tha...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Suggestion: This
..., health insurance and no tax on income.This step can change their mind to not going...
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Suggestion: For
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , despite
...ntries of their people. In conclusion,despite the fact that less payscale and more ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84905660377 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6066432095 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468553459119 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 106.0 20.2975951904 522% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 437.837869536 49.4020404114 886% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 514.0 106.682146367 482% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 106.0 20.7667163134 510% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207825066143 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151320482278 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325296201063 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141915578071 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263743690089 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 54.4 13.0946893788 415% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.65 50.2224549098 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.5 11.3001002004 385% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.82 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 44.4 10.1190380762 439% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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