Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
Some people say that Cars have more demerits than the merits.I agree with this viewpoint because disadvantages of cars are more like it creates health problems for humans and it is very much costly while the advantages are just it saves time and its comfortability.
The First advantage of Cars are when we use it then it saves our lot of time than going by public transport.Because we are not restricted by their timing and we do not have to stop on any others stop like Trains and buses.Second advantage of cars are comfort because we can stop when we need and we can enjoy the outside weather.If we need rest then we can sleep in our cars.For example,in 2015, we planned our journey to Goa from Mumbai and we enjoyed it because of full of comfortable journey and it saves our lot of time as compared to by public transportation.
The Disadvantages of cars are its problem for our health,if we prefer more of cars for shorter distance then our body can become obese very fast and it is not good for our well being.The other disadvantages of cars is it cost, that normal people cannot get it without any loans from bank.Aftrr buying cars the cannot invest on any other things for their personal or professional use.For Instance,As per one study by Institute of medical sciences that after introduction of cars in India, obesity issues increased by 35 percent.I agree with this because cars have more drawbacks as compared to benefits.
To conclude, despite the fact that cars have some benefits like saving our precious time and we feel comfortable in it, However It brings health issues which we cannot ignore and they are very costly to buy it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70103092784 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68887552807 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494845360825 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.910512834 49.4020404114 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 342.0 106.682146367 321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.75 20.7667163134 350% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269495688906 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206900580951 0.084324248473 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116562329741 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206900580951 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116562329741 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 13.0946893788 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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