The diagram below show how orange juice is produced
The process describes the manufacture of orange juice. There are 14 main stages in the whole orange juice producing process, beginning with collecting fresh oranges and ending with distributing product to supermarkets.
Firstly, fresh oranges are delivered to factory and they are washed before extraction. Then, solid waste and juice are separated by squeezer, one becomes animal food, the other is mixed with water to make orange juice. In the next stage, orange juice can either be packed to move to supermarket or transferred to another step performed by evaporator machine.
In the evaporation process, the water from fresh orange juice will be removed. Following this, the concentrated juice is canned and then transfer to warehouse. Before packaging, water is added to each can. The entire orange juice producing process concludes after orange juice boxes are delivered to supermarket
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47482014388 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72140310949 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5009464901 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271024681646 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121756157163 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853842976587 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204205225295 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386529804308 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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