The Pie Charts illustrate the data regarding Global population rate and spendings over various sectors.
As the charts represent, people of the world are spent most of the money on the food sector, while the least amount is allocated on clothing. More than 50% of the population size is occupied in Asia.
As per world spendings, approximately a quarter of the budget is utilised on food, followed by 18% on transportation. However, a small fraction of money [6%] is spent on clothes, whereas it is doubled on housing. Also, two- fifths of the amount contributed to other regions.
In terms of world population, almost 60% of the world population is occupied by Asian countries. While Europe and America are accounted for 14%, Africa is represented just 10%. However, just a small percentage [5%] is other territories.
- Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? 61
- The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances. Some people regard this change as an improvement, while others believe that it is harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
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- The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students PhD students and junior lecturers at an Australian university 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10294117647 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91042750044 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.24148978 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1111111111 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917050233999 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320907720257 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040155887118 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541651625025 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020057769126 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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