The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table reveals evidence of the underground railway systems in six major cities in the field of opening date, total length of route, and annual ridership.
In general, all mentioned features of six railroad systems varied extensively. While Kyoto’s system accounted for the shortest length and the lowest passenger statistics per year, the oldest system in London showed the longest route.
In 1863, London’s underground system coming first construction reached a total of 394 kms in length. By comparison with the latest system in Los Angeles being inaugurated in 2001 (lengthening 28 kms of route) that carried out 50 passengers per annum, such system carried almost sixteenfold increase in a full load of people.
Fast forward to the subterranean railway at the turn of the 20th century saw the establishment of the system located in Tokyo, built in 1927, served the largest number of passenger at 1927 million, followed by Paris as the second highest number. Washington Dc’s subway with 126 kms in line recorded 144 million travellers. Simultaneously, the data showed 11 kms and 45 million for the system length and ridership of Kyoto’s system.
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit.Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.You should write at least 250 words. 80
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree.-Syerapke- (rewrite) 40
- You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for threemonths over the summer.Write a letter to the Manager. In your lettersay what experience you haveask what the work involvesinquire about conditionsYou should write at least 150 words.All 80
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is to increase the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. 60
- You have a friend who lives in a city abroad.You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city.Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have bee 90
London’s underground system coming first construction reached a total of 394 kms in length.
London’s underground system coming as the first construction reached a total of 394 kms in length.
Sentence: By comparison with the latest system in Los Angeles being inaugurated in 2001 lengthening 28 kms of route that carried out 50 passengers per annum, such system carried almost sixteenfold increase in a full load of people.
Error: sixteenfold Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 186 200
No. of Characters: 942 1000
No. of Different Words: 114 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.693 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.065 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.711 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.639 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.426 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.702 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4