Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Crime and punishment are inseparable one another. If there is a proof that someone is involved in a crime, he or she will get a punishment to make him or her be cured of such bad habit. Most of people agree on the implementation of punishment to control crime’s rate. However, among these people, there is a debate on how to decide proper punishment for criminals. Some people believe that there are some factors such as circumstances and motivation in committing crime which should be considered to determine the punishment. Meanwhile, some other people believe that there should be fixed punishme...
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Sentence: Crime and punishment are inseparable one another.
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