TV it is the best human invention in the last century and have many advantages and disadvantages in our live some people spend most of their spare time watching TV while others prefer to spend their times in different things. I will try to explain how TV has a harms and benefits.
Initially, people who spend a lot of time watching television loos the ability to communicate withe there friends and families however, many people spend many hours on watching TV while they supposed to give the entire attention to their families and friends.In many ways TV make problems between family members for instance, each member of the family have something specific to watch and that one of the popular problem in many families. Some TV programs does not have a privacy and shows a lot of sexual overtones and that isolation affect in particular children. TV shows a violent movies that effect children and younger lives and let them portrayed the live as a place of fight and make them grow up with an aggressive filling to the others. Also, watching TV for many hours can ruin our relation with others and make us unsocial and that means few friends and few family. Furthermore, TV consider one of the reasons of the physical illness however more hour watching TV means less hour exercise and less hour walking and less fresh air. Fore addition, week vision problem come from watching TV.
Moreover, previously I mentioned to the reasons for TV harms but in the other hand, there are many advantages for TV however, many families enjoy watching TV together and that will give more chances for them to set and communicate and build a good relationship. Furthermore, watching TV can eliminate stressed and tension and many people stay home and drink to enjoy their night withe their special program in particular elderly people do that. Fore instance, my grand father every day before he goes to the bed like to watch break news with us and the night series.
In my conclusion, there are many pros and cons on watching TV and as I mentioned to the advantage and the disadvantage in my opinion, every things depends in how we use the TV and how many hours we stay in front the TV, if we use the TV in a rational way and try to eliminate the hours we will have time for our family and friends otherwise, we will loss hours and hours and be unsocial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...attention to their families and friends.In many ways TV make problems between fami...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... of sexual overtones and that isolation affect in particular children. TV shows a violent...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'movie'?
Suggestion: movie
...particular children. TV shows a violent movies that effect children and younger lives ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'few families'.
Suggestion: few families
...unsocial and that means few friends and few family. Furthermore, TV consider one of the re...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rational way" with adverb for "rational"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... stay in front the TV, if we use the TV in a rational way and try to eliminate the hours we will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63309352518 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46885260111 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47242206235 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.978159458 48.9658058833 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.0 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 20.6045352989 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0408900639897 0.236089414692 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0159259155964 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271338806357 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0230995557035 0.150856017488 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208150673712 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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