A friend is expecting you to stay with him in two weeks time, but unfortunately you forgot that you have a business trip at the same time.
Write letter to friend
-apologise and say that you cannot come to visit
-explain why you will not able to visit
-suggest another time that you could visit
Dear Mohan,
I hope you are doing well at your end, I am writing this letter to make you aware that our planned trip to London at your place for 2 weeks needs to be cancelled from my end because I have some other work to finish. Therefore, I request for forgiveness.
Recently, I have started a new business in Canada and I realized that in coming weeks I have meetings with the client from America and Africa and it is very important for me to meet them to start this business effectively.
Hence, I request you that we can plan this visit at your place in October if you do not have anything else to do and at the same time Robin will also be free to spend some time together. Therefore I request you to make this plan in coming October month.
I hope you will understand my circumstance and please inform me about your plans so that we can book tickets.
With regards,
Vishal
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-10-13 | b.past | 73 | view |
| 2019-09-02 | mohseenshaikh | 73 | view |
| 2019-08-08 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-31 | amitsadhana | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...so be free to spend some time together. Therefore I request you to make this plan in comi...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36526946108 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34187628289 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.4596431946 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30397352967 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125552375362 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917703730844 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170191855859 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843794927311 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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