In some countries, it can be very difficult for people over the age of 50 to get a good jobs, despite their experience.
What do you think are the causes and effects of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve it?
In today modern world, the competition to find a good job becomes more and more competitive than ever before. This situation seems worse for people over 50. There are several reasons and consequences for this worrying trend and some measures should be taken to tackle this problem.
Significant factors why the mentioned difficulty occurred might easily be noticed. For one, as memorizing and cognitive abilities decrease with ages, the employers assume that those old workers would not fulfill their tasks excellently. Another point could add is that older employees might feel hard to ado...
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Sentence: Despite the fact that it is not easy to regulate companies to treat equally to worker who are over 50, some steps should be taken to resolve the problem.
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