.A letter to your teacher explaining the sudden decision of leaving the course and returning to your home country. Express thanks to your teacher, why you had to leave and what part of the course you enjoyed the most.
Dear Headteacher,
I am sorry I am writing only now. I am Jasmin Kaur. I am a student enrolled in a bachelors degree programme in your prestigious college. The reasons for my writing is to inform you that I have to abandon my study course for this fall. Simultaneously, I have to departure to my country last September of this week. Let me elaborate on this .
Initially, I thought I will be able to cover up my course fee. Besides this, I was engaged in part-time work also to congregate my college fees. Unluckily, I am unable to fulfill my fee deadlines for college. Consequently, I have given the notice from the institution for late fees as well as next semester fee structure. As a result, I am unable to cope with my job also like the coffee shop in which I was working they have fired me as a cause of lack of concentration as I was worried about my pending fees which affected my work life too.
Needless to say, the university has boycotted me from attending the classes and I have to leave this country as my status doesn't allow me to leave here. I would appreciate it if you could bear the expense of flight tickets. I promise I will pay you soon. I feel gratitude to you towards helping me in paying my last semester examination fees. There is no doubt, that I will feel the absence of your lectures of sociology taught by you. That was the most exquisite part of the syllabus that was like a piece of a cake for me to grab the lessons.
To recap, I feel apologize again that I m unable to fulfill my commitments and have to make a decision in a rush to go back again.
yours faithfully,
jasmin kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bachelor' or simply 'bachelors'?
Suggestion: a bachelor; bachelors
...Jasmin Kaur. I am a student enrolled in a bachelors degree programme in your prestigious co...
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Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r of this week. Let me elaborate on this . Initially, I thought I will be able to...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...have to leave this country as my status doesnt allow me to leave here. I would appreci...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tickets. I promise I will pay you soon. I feel gratitude to you towards helping m...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...a decision in a rush to go back again. yours faithfully, jasmin kaur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, if, so, well, i feel, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 32.9175257732 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 304.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33552631579 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69599920573 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 290.88556701 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3537404151 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3684210526 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123320817819 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446337787801 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04521680129 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689948165635 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582209174399 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.