Some countries encourage children to do paid work. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
These days hustle and bustle life of people are getting busy all should have own responsibilities to take not for others. Directly come to the topic, in fact, many countries children are early age to do the job as per order that his family. I discuss some pros and cons above this essay.
Firstly, parents have a mentality to his child stand at own duties it is common things for other family members. Secondly, in international countries, most of the pupils doing a job as well as study at adults life, due to his school fees or college furnish to there. Foremost lot's of parents believe that adolescent will take over his upcoming future a colourful life would easily. But nowadays, some parents financially not sound can not wish to fulfill that why child have to do job.
On the other side poor family members are just intention only growth his child to earning for them not the purpose of education instead of doing jobs like bagging from big cities also not provide sufficient food that why sometimes children physically as well as mentally disables this indigenous situations poor members are facing, doing a job is not bad idea but elsewhere child his fulfill other things his parents job.
To sum up if parents have financially sound way those who have give importance value of money instead of spening While those who are not able to furnish primary rights who can not emphasizes on a child but parents also do efforts for his child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70472440945 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42840632809 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.614720261 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.777777778 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942747550586 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471319968046 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461316814871 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642344025645 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034478958644 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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