Most people prefer ready to eat ready meals rather than home made for these days.What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Most people prefer ready to eat ready meals rather than home made for these days.
What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays, the majority of people would like to have convenient food than homely food due to its benefits, but it also has some drawbacks which will discuss in this easy.
Many people consider fast food is tasty and delicious because the food often cooked by professional cook. Moreover, having food from restaurant gives some satisfaction for many people so they prefer to dine out. Also, the online food service can save the time for many especially, those work more hours because they may not get time to cook at home. Interestingly, today, some food corner offer a massive discount and cash back offers to customers through mobile applications like Zomato, Swiggy, Uber eats and so on for attract to the public. Consequently, people try to utilize the facility which given by eateries.
On the other hand, it also have immense disadvantages which will adversely affect to the person. Eating excessive amount of junk food seriously harmful to health. This is because, a considerable amount of chemical contents are used while making it which has more fat, carbohydrates, salt and other substances. Subsequently, it creates many health issues such as diabetes, heart problems, cholesterol, obesity and other severe health ailments especially among youngsters when they consume it. Another drawback is that some food is expensive to buy so impoverished people unable to buy and taste it like biriyani.
To sum up, this fast pacing world, many people would not have adequate time to cook at home and therefore people consume more restaurant food. It not only provides benefits to people, but also dangerous to health.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, such as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14393939394 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6944042105 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0649651278 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106446573204 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407045136173 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029222611776 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070454723205 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216539942167 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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