The two pie charts depicts the information about the percentage of monthly domestic income expenditures on types items by two different categories in one European country.
At first glance,it is clearly seen that,the maximum percentage of household earing spend on food and drinks which was 29% whereas,the minimum percentage of domestic income expenditures were utilized in restaurants which was 4% further,the percentage of households pays on spending on misellano and clothes which was 18% and 5% respectively. Moreover, there was about 6% difference between the proportion of domestic pay consumed on clothing and recreation culture.
Moving further,the percentage of domestic income consumed on recreation culture was 3 times more as compared to fuel Bills.while,there was a 8% difference between the proportion of households pay spend on food and drink,clothing following the 10% of households
Pay consumed on transports which was 10%
Overall, the highest percentage of household income spend on food and drink by high income group.
- The charts below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with trade health and education Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience 73
- Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians What are the reasons for this Is it a positive or negative development 95
- Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news While others believe that more effective way is through other media Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- The diagrams below illustrate changes affected in the district park between 2004 and 2014
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65605095541 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26681434218 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554140127389 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.70733555 43.030603864 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.0 112.824112599 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.25 22.9334400587 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248549011553 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17244040654 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130273475509 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165264611462 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129394660316 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.2329268293 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 61.2550243902 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.14 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 11.0658536585 226% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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