Parents should be legally held responsible for children’s act.
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typically day revels parents should be legally held responsibility for children act has always been one of a permanent topic in the contemporary discussion people have always been intrigued to analyze and explain. Regarding this, I would believe that it is happening.
To begin with, parents are responsible for children for the upbringing of child. Children in their early age learn many lessen of life from parents. Therefore, I agree for Parents should be legally held responsible for children’s act. Because children mostly time spent with family in childhood time. Children are agreeing with parents in all type work. Parents are always gives the good ideas of life and life survive. Some parents very strict for own children.
Farther more, children are very close to parents and parents closely monitor child’s growth. Thus if they fails to point out such mistake of child then indirectly they are also responsible for child act. Parents play big roll of children life because its depend on parents. They allow children in all time for watch television and on the other hand they are very strict the children.
Overall, parents play critical and vital role in child upbringing they clearly know child behavior and traits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ld responsible for children's act. Because children mostly time spent with family ...
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...with family in childhood time. Children are agreeing with parents in all type work. Parents ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ts closely monitor child's growth. Thus if they fails to point out such mistake...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'fail'
Suggestion: fail
...nitor child's growth. Thus if they fails to point out such mistake of child then...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...early know child behavior and traits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13901345291 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62706030316 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578475336323 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9574613755 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.508021456864 0.242375264174 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176673934548 0.0925447433944 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207468644905 0.071462118173 290% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274453462408 0.151781067708 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173243946387 0.0609392437508 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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