Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
The responsibility of children's action lie on the shoulders of parents. Some people believe that parents should be held liable for their children's action while others disagree. This essay will discuss how this argument is true.
To begin with, children are immature to understand the consequences of the wrong doings. They fail to realise that certain actions will create a mess in the future and it will effect their parent's life. For instance, a boy in our neighbourhood used to steal scrap things from other's house and no serious action was taken by their parents, despite complaining to them several times. After some years, he started stealing on a larger scale, which led to his arrest by police and now he is in jail serving his sentence and his parents are devastated. Therefore, he could have lived his life freely if parents would have taken serious action at that same time.
Secondly, improper supervision by parents can lead children to engage in negative activities. Some parents due to lack of time or in some cases laziness are not able to monitor their child properly, which gives children the room to participate in wrong activities. For example, one of my cousins, whose both parents were working was caught in breaking the windows of neighbours intentionally for fun and was beaten badly by one of the guy, fracturing his ribs. Thus, it is essential that parents are made responsible for their children's actions.
In conclusion, lack of supervision by parents and inability of children to understand the seriousness of matters can create issues for children at a young age. In my opinion, a law should be made to make parents accountable for the actions of their children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...create a mess in the future and it will effect their parents life. For instance, a boy...
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Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had taken'?
Suggestion: had taken
...d have lived his life freely if parents would have taken serious action at that same time. Se...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
... parents due to lack of time or in some cases laziness are not able to monitor their ...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: WHOSE_DT[5]
Message: Did you mean 'who's'?
Suggestion: who's
...vities. For example, one of my cousins, whose both parents were working was caught in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97192982456 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69931537209 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3563779645 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286125230015 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114359893905 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955827067466 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199949395211 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667989343011 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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