A friend has agreed to stay in your flat and look after it while you are away. You want to give some information about the flat.
1. Give information about the flat.
2. Provide any important instruction.
3. Say what he/she should do if there are any problems.
Dear sania,
I am writing this letter in concern to appreciate your efforts of helping me by staying and taking care of my apartment in my absence. Through this letter I only want to aware you about few things so that you can enjoy living at new place.
Firstly, I want you give you some information about the place. The taps of washroom are slightly leaky. You need to check twice before leaving the washroom. The water temperature is 65, You can adjust it according to your need. The main door lock is bit loose, You need to push hard to lock it.
As I stated some points about my flat. So, you need to be careful about them. The most prominent thing is my apartment is located near school. So, you must drive slow after entering into street to avoid any mishappening.
Further, I mentioned all the necessary things which are required for you. Above all, if you face any problem, you can call on numbers with their respective helper's name on diary which i placed on door of fridge. That diary contains all most complete information including our neighbor's contact details.
I hope you enjoy the time.
See you soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sania, I am writing this letter in concern to a...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...ing to your need. The main door lock is bit loose, You need to push hard to lock it...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e, You need to push hard to lock it. As I stated some points about my flat. So,...
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Line 8, column 185, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... respective helpers name on diary which i placed on door of fridge. That diary co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60396039604 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34256254025 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648514851485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9945742439 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.125 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.625 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284006167549 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965677726571 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892243229473 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142678390294 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543475603192 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.