Fewer schools are requiring children to learn and improve their hand writing skills.
Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages of this trend?
Some educational institutes expect children to grasp and upgrade their writing dexterity. While there are several advantages for improving handwriting, but there are also few disadvantages that needs to be taken into account.
To consider the advantages, handwriting is a basic tool in many subjects.Because, they are used to perform tests, taking notes, and writing homework. For example, during exams if the written script is illegible, then it would result in lower marks. As a result, legible handwriting would result in good performance. Additionally, there is a link between cognition and writing by hand. Certainly, children learn better when they are forced to write by hand rather than type. Finally, a good handwriting skill implicates high performance and better learning.
On the other hand, the disadvantage of longhand is time consuming. since, technology has been improved and moved towards touch-typing,conventional writing methods would consume more time. For instance, in touch-typing there is a auto-correct and spell check functionality which help to make the writing more legible and complete on-time. Moreover, in writing, paper used exorbitantly.To perform all manual written tasks, ample amount of papers were used. For instance, a recent survey conducted on conservation of natural resources, provided a shocking report that around 67% of trees were cut down each year by paper production industries. Consequently, exploitation of natural resources increased.
To conclude, even though our performance rely on handwriting, the negative impacts like a waste of time and natural materials are high. So, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages here.
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Suggestion: Because
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Suggestion: used to performing
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: to better; to well
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Suggestion: Since
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Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.748 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37048127127 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9374485173 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182721297109 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625004232499 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695244712226 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111333401205 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436842665667 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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