The pie charts below show the different reasons for flight delays in a particular
Asian country in 2015 and 2016.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
A detailed comparitive study has been made between various factors that led to flight delay and has been illustrated as a pie chart.
In detail,the airplane operations and management has hit a high off from 40% in the year 2015 to 46% in 2016.One of the common scenarios that has caused an obstacle is the weather at a range 21-23%.There has been a significant decline for the air traffic control with a difference of 13% within a year.
On the contrary,there has been a rise in airport security with a variation of 9% while the military reason has gone down to 6%.
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 61
- the line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books by type that were borrowed over this time. summarize the information by selecting and 78
- The pie charts below show the different reasons for flight delays in a particular Asian country in 2015 and 2016 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 80
- The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. 56
- Task 1 IELTS Writing Model - Cambridge 8 Test 4 Goods transported in UK (1974 – 2002) 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...n illustrated as a pie chart. In detail,the airplane operations and management has ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...rom 40% in the year 2015 to 46% in 2016.One of the common scenarios that has caused...
^^^
Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...stacle is the weather at a range 21-23%.There has been a significant decline for the ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...of 13% within a year. On the contrary,there has been a rise in airport security wit...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 468.0 965.302439024 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 102.0 196.424390244 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58823529412 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17797182781 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87554217344 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 143.1 283.868780488 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3428956127 43.030603864 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.0 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118582580414 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719079829041 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034194282652 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719079829041 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034194282652 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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