Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is argued by some that the youth phase of life is the most joyous, while others believe that the adulthood makes life more delighted, even though it involves significant accountability. This essay agrees that adulthood is the best time of life as one can truly recognise their achievements in this phase. The essay will discuss first, how teenage life is dependent and then mention, adulthood is true cheerful phase of life.
To begin with, it is agreed that adolescent years are the most secured years of one’s life as majority of kids are enrolled in schools and are well nurtured back home. In this phase, they are well protected, their needs are taken care of, and most of the wishes are fulfilled by loving parents. However, they are completely dependent on their families for almost everything they want and they have to take permission for their inside as well as outside activities. For example, teens have to get approval from parents before inviting their friends at home or to watch a movie in a theatre. There is no doubt that this phase is joyous, but the significant reliance on families and lack of freedom makes it less enjoyable than adulthood.
On the other hand, when a person becomes an adult and makes a living on their own, that feeling of self supporting is extremely enjoyable. It is that time of life when a person can truly enjoy the things they want to do without parent’s financial support and approval. For example, many people get emotional talking about their experience of buying a first car or a house. Although being adult is challenging because of work and other financial needs, however, I personally believe achieving career goals relieves true happy moments of life which can only be experienced in this phase.
In conclusion, adolescent years are dependent years of one’s life, whereas grown up life leads into achieving career goals and living desired happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er goals and living desired happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, talking about, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94769230769 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59469463265 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547692307692 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.2795652381 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155374697577 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583081273 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431821818437 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101961066883 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327178024848 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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