El Nino is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Nino conditions.
The diagram compares the weather patterns in the Pacific Ocean, one with the impacts of El Nino and the other without. Overall, El Nino affects the environment negatively; causing several disturbances in natural phenomena, such as changes in winds’ direction.
Under normal conditions, strong trade winds blow from the East, causes warm water to travel westwards. Besides, weak winds in the West Pacific also blow eastward and storm clouds make rainfall in this region. These features create rainy and cloudy weather in Australia, which help nourishing vegetation well . Cool water rises and more nutrients are available in the ocean of the Eastern area, hence, the amount of fish increases under the sunny weather of Peru.
Regarding El Nino conditions, most of the phenomena above are reversed. Strong winds blow from the West and weak trade winds begin in the East. These abnormal directions of blowing push warm water to the east and cool water are trapped in the bottom of the ocean floor; the nutrients are also inadequate. Consequently, droughts occurred in Australia and too much rain in Peru makes marine life suffers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to nourish' or 'nourish'.
Suggestion: to nourish; nourish
...cloudy weather in Australia, which help nourishing vegetation well . Cool water rises and ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...a, which help nourishing vegetation well . Cool water rises and more nutrients are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, hence, if, regarding, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21857923497 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56124761918 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.847780487 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286691588127 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113574119973 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142968937469 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216489821514 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140914515255 0.0819641961636 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.