The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two pie charts reflecting the information about the rate of Australian household energy in different sectors and the amount of household greenhouse gases emitted in same parts in Australia.
The first chart demonstrates that the greatest parts of energy consumptions are respectively related to heating and water heating, 42% and 30%. Surprisingly, heating section has relatively the small contribution in gas emission however, the water heating is responsible for one-third of total consumption. Besides, Cooling is the smallest section in energy consumption with only 2% which play a tiny role in greenhouse gas emission, 3%.
The second chart reveals that the rate of emission by refrigeration and lighting are exactly two times of their energy uses by 14 and 8% respectively. Finally, 15% of energy use has allocated to other appliances and it is clearly evident that its contribution in gas emissions is 28 % which is notable.
To summarize, it seems that there is not a direct relation between two above-mentioned charts. As, some sectors, namely refrigeration and other appliances demonstrate that the energy consumption is low, wherever the gases emitted by them are double and vice versa in household use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...double and vice versa in household use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38219895288 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13851245285 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596858638743 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5525830705 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281355576187 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116926676545 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661182518759 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165958849754 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626618776029 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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