You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
In economics class we are tought about asset and liabilities. Asset is a source with which we make profit and liability is something on which we need to spend more. if i had enough money to purchase a house or a business, I would choose to buy business over house. Because i see business as a asset whereas house is kind of liability for me.
First, With business i could get financial stability. With business i get to option to make it big and even spread it to other part of the country or nation and make it international. With all this i can achieve financial stability, name and frame. Along with all this i can invest on my own house which will even more bigger. Where as in case i would have chosen house instead of a business i would have settled with that house only.
In addition to this i get to be my own boss. If i would own a business I will be the boss, i don't really have to be working under someone, I would be able to make my own decisions. I would independent to hire my own team who will help me in growing my business even more.
With the money i would have earned I would also invest some money in social work. I could invest in some charity programs or even build a old age home to elders and help orphan child to pursue their education. I could even be able to create employment opportunities in the country.
In conclusion,I believe if we want to high profit then we have to take higher risk. So with all the possibility of all good things happening even with some risk involved, I would always choose a business over a house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, then, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27609427609 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46197257026 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47138047138 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7973387489 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.7058823529 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160465658089 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601894480616 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895978552959 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933849504293 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480412135629 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.