In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements withing that field.
I disagree to the given argument to a greater extent. All of us know the famous saying that "Necessity is the mother of any invention". One ponders and finds new things and makes great discoveries based on the need of the hour. The idea for such an invention arises from the past contributions or an example which they notice in their day to day activities.
Moreover, if the Wright brothers did not think of the bird's flight, then they would not have discovered the aeroplane we use today to make movement from on country to another easier and takes less time. also, papers published in journals by professors get the idea from other people who have already submitted papers in well reputed journals. Furthermore, there is a line of development from the first invention to the recent inventions. The cars from olden days differs and contrasts greatly with the modern car. The automatic gear, sensors and air bags prove evidence to it. Similarly, in many other field like automobile and telecom devices also, we could witness the same.
Nevertheless, it need not be true in all the cases. For the first discovery, there could not have been a past influence. For example, Sir Isaac Newton discovered gravity by chance. it was only because of an apple falling on his head from a tree. there is no role of a past contribution in it. Further, Albert Einstein found many theories in physics which were found by chance and not from a past contribution.
Thus, in order to conclude, we can say that it depends on a field to check whether past contributions play an essential role in newer discoveries. Although, a good number of inventions need an idea from the past, it need not be true for all the cases.
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... apple falling on his head from a tree. there is no role of a past contribution in it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75585284281 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74055728698 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6263801021 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149955416722 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437914610696 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389675932859 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092480952948 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272676104714 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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