More and more people now choose to wear the fashionable clothes.
Given the non-stop advance of fashion, wearing vogue clothing is now considered attractive choice for people in today's world. While it would certainly be easy to garner either benefits or drawbacks of this change, I believe that the whole development is still necessary.
On the one hand, there are countless drawbacks of the aspirations of fashionable clothes. Firstly, following fashion blindly is a waste of time and money. It means that fashionable and branded stuff should be within reach one’s budget because it will be extremely risk for people who just earned 1000$ per month but spent a half of their salary on buying clothes. As a result, it is difficult for them to enable to do other important things. In addition, when citizens go out with their gorgeous clothes, they will be judged more by others. For instance, someone wants to express oneself in some unsuitable occasion such as they intend to go to the supermarket and wearing a latest fad clothes
On the other hand, the advantage of wearing fashionable clothes should not be underestimated. One striking benefit is that fashions will make people more attractive to others. Indeed, fashionably dressed play a crucial key in displaying oneself in a distinguish way and, thereby their ideas or opinions would be heard readily and their personality will capture minds for quite some time. Moreover, wearing wonderful clothes can raise oneself confident. For instance, celebrities always wear wonderful clothes that make them feel better and release stress when they stand on a large stage.
In conclusion, it is clear that although nobody can deny the detrimental impacts of wearing vogue clothes, I believe that this trend is simultaneously positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...tremely risk for people who just earned 1000$ per month but spent a half of their sal...
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Line 3, column 679, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...nd to go to the supermarket and wearing a latest fad clothes On the other hand...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... a crucial key in displaying oneself in a distinguish way and, thereby their ideas or opinion...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21505376344 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77108454798 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0653033444 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267056559048 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928850880558 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728829039313 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149171508307 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435183584793 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.