The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of australian people who took regular exercise according to gender in different age groups.
Overall, women in Australia prefered doing regular physical activity to men with the percentage of women was higher than the figure for men in most of the age groups.
among australian men, people between 15 and 24 years old took regular exercise most with 52,8%. Only 39,5% of 35 to 44-year-old men did regular physical activity, the lowest figure was shown in the chart. This proportion increased gradually to 46,7% among those who aged over 65 years old.
The highest proportion of australian women doing regular physical activity belonged to 45-54 age group, followed by the figure for 35-44 age group and 55-64 age group, 52,5% and 53% respectively. By contrast, the percentage of australian women aged over 65 years old doing regular exercise was lowest, which stood at 47,1%.
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- many governments think that economic progress is the most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Among
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56994595706 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5624989098 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300603368993 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151246848383 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624052615242 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202631589955 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358546441 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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