Dear Mrs Natasha,
I am writing to apologise for the meeting about the Software upgrade that I missed on the 20th of April, 2019.
I am deeply sorry for not being able to attend the meeting. I know how crucial the meeting was to the company but my absence was unfortunately unavoidable.
What happened is that I had an accident on my way to work that day and I was rushed to a nearby health facility. Although , it was not a fatal accident but the doctor did not allow me to leave until I was given a given a 'clean bill of health'.
Nevertheless, I know how imperative this meeting was and so I had contacted my colleague, Rose, and she has agreed to give me a load down of all the intricacies of the meeting agenda after close of work today. She will tell me all about people's roles and responsibilities and deadlines for each task given.
I am very sorry and I hope you will forgive me and be assured of my undivided commitment to the company and its future.
Yours sincerely,
Wunmi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2019'.
Suggestion: April 2019
...re upgrade that I missed on the 20th of April, 2019. I am deeply sorry for not being abl...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r not being able to attend the meeting. I know how crucial the meeting was to the...
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Line 8, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed to a nearby health facility. Although , it was not a fatal accident but the doc...
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Line 8, column 206, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'given a'.
Suggestion: given a
...r did not allow me to leave until I was given a given a clean bill of health. Nevertheless, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44324324324 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66156727135 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2009681784 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165903704977 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683107274463 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529156624684 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961035728774 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672881825127 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.