Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
To some people, sorts of information and advice should be acquired from acquaintances. However, others believe that books and the Internet are the best way to approach them. While people, sometimes, could provide helpful information and advice to some extent, I believe that other sources such as books or the Internet are more significant.
The most common reason that people should obtain information from others is that it often comes from daily interaction, which can be easily achieved by actively communicating with others. During the conversation, they are likely to share different types of information that might be helpful and necessary in certain situations. Apart from that, people need to receive advice from other people, who might probably have been in similar circumstances before had successfully overcome that. For example, before taking the IELTS test, candidates could ask the former ones, who are with many years of experience and expertise, to get helpful recommendations such as being confident and punctual. Therefore, their outcomes will be more rewarding and satisfied.
Alongside the source of information and advice given by others expressed above, I believe that the Internet and books could facilitate people to achieve them more effectively. Generally, most books are written by professionals and journalists, who are experienced and well-qualified. Therefore, people could rely on them to get their wanted information. Besides, self-help books also play an important role in conveying helpful advice and are highly recommended for those who are struggling with their hurdles. They often contain advanced instructions and steps that people could follow to get rid of their matters. Besides, the Internet is also considered as a great source of information due to its convenience and comfort. People could take advantage of it to get online and help themselves by using the searching tool - Google, and millions of results will pop up on the screen.
In conclusion, although for some people, it is better to receive consultancy from others, I believe that the mentioned reasons above regarding the impact of books and the Internet could have a far greater effect.
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| 2019-08-20 | Mr.Strange | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42565597668 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92747280293 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536443148688 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.001995541 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313665499789 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106126652976 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866622347939 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21256272401 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911203272271 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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