Sending criminals to prison is the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are a better way to help them. Do you agree or disagree?
all around the world accept punishment of crimenals but they have different method for this issue. some governments use prison, others use work in difficult condition for them. Hence we cant say the best way for criminals is prison. in the rest of this writing we will talk about advantage and disadvantage of this topic.
most of the governments around the world use prison to punishment criminals and dont let them to continue their method in the society. this way has some advantage like seperate these kind of people from others and dont let them do bad behavior in society and learn other this thing. besides of that the criminals punished when they stay at the prison and try to be good person and act as normal member of the comunity.
on the other hand, when you force people to stay in the specific place for a while and dont let them to contact with other persons, they feel horibol and some times they turn to the interior person. Also, they learn bad thing more from others and improve their bad behavior. so if you free them, they do worst thing in the society. there for government should categorise the kind of prison and dont let all prisoners see each other and share their information between each others.
in conclusion, prison is one of the way for punishment but its not the best way. governers can find other ways to punishe people with the bad behavior and change their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.632 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26515871409 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8515859056 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0769230769 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205572624323 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898532829825 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610955919441 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141919575367 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202599347024 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.