Sending criminals to prison is the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are a better way to help them. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people claim that criminals should be sent to prison instead of being educated or provided with training. while it is true that strict punishments should be imposed on the people who commit a crime, I believe that it is also necessary to increase their awareness and give them vocational training.
To begin with, there are several reasons why the government should send lawbreakers to prison. Firstly, there are people who are accused of serious illegal activities such as murder or terrorism, those must be isolated from society. if they are allowed to live in the community, it would be a threat to the safety of other residents. Secondly, since imprisonment is a strict punishment, it can be an effective method to warn others against breaking the law. For example, pedestrians in Singapore can be jailed in 6-month if they constitute the traffic violation of jaywalking.
However, I would argue that the authorities should also consider providing criminals with education and vocational training. Primarily, it is important to give the wrongdoers a good education, which would positively increase their awareness. As a result, the recurrence of violation can be prevented. In addition, as prisoners receive vocational training such as electrical or building work, they will have more chance to get a job after being freed from jail. if they have no skills or knowledge, they might find difficult to re-enter the workforce. This is one of the reasons why criminals re-commit a crime.
In conclusion, while it is necessary to put criminals to prison, I agree with the idea that the authorities should be also in consideration of improving the prisoner's awareness and providing them with vocational training.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22661870504 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9417093764 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7306808657 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15909706285 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541802455444 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634600582065 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117151005303 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609411140025 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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