It is often said that “music is like a divine magic”, and is indeed true, because music works like a divine magic for all of us. Most of the people cannot live their life without listening to music each and every day.
Music impresses us, inspires us and remedies us and helps us to understand others. There are different kinds of music that vary from one region to other and from one language to other. They vary from traditional music to anthem, even to hard rock and pop. The kind of music each and every individual listens to depends on mood, age and interest. I believed that whatever the music they listen to, they need to preserve their traditional music because the traditional music is the one which defines the position of our country during war times and it shows our cultures and traditions to a large extent. Music is the only thing that reaches us all over through ages and inspires us to do something.
With the modern technologies, satellite communication and internet, music can be heard at any corner of the world. But the young generation now a days are more inclined towards the western music and are not even interested in listening to their traditional music. Although they have their freedom in choosing their interests, their own country’s traditional music should not be kept aside. In my country, most of the people firstly listen to the music in their olden days and then listen to foreign music. I also listen to the traditional music mostly because i feel that it has got some good feelings and it teaches me some old traditions followed in my country. Sometimes I listen to western music as it helps to improve my knowledge in English which is very much necessary in today’s life.
To conclude, each and every individual should give equal importance to their traditional music as that of western music as it helps in knowing our country’s traditions and cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'depend'.
Suggestion: depend
...ic each and every individual listens to depends on mood, age and interest. I believed t...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and interest. I believed that whatever the music they listen to, they need to p...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... of the world. But the young generation now a days are more inclined towards the western ...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...the world. But the young generation now a days are more inclined towards the western ...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... generation now a days are more inclined towards the western music and are not ev...
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Line 5, column 567, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to the traditional music mostly because i feel that it has got some good feelings...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8247734139 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6753865094 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504531722054 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3664629758 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35374506609 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141430569171 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584314704075 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232090183085 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061981217456 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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