The 21 centry has begun. What Changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answear.
21 Century just begun but already is providing us with some of the most important foresight of what could be achieved
in our near future. Our century could be the one to change our world and our understanding of everything around us.
The world is changing and we also change with it.
First of all, our world is changing every day, in many aspects, we can clearly can see the change in our society and what is viewed as normal comparing to not so long ago, we can see new technology and discoveries that elevate us as a species. Therefore it's pretty normal to dream what else this century will bring. For example in a futuristic book publicized in 1965 people were dreaming about the future of our world imagining the changes that would occur,most of them indeed happen but some of them are far behind our current development, this implies that world is changing so are our views on future. I belive that our modern world will change vastly when we eventually will discover long distance space travel, this is a important discovery that will change everything. Including our goals as a species and as future colonists of distant worlds. Space travel is a important phase of our evolution, and it's crucial to make it more reliable because our survival depends on it.
Secondly, i think 21 century will bring crucial development in the medical sphere. For example, when penicillin was discovered it totally changed the way people were cured from different disease and this vastly extended human's lifespan. I think eventually humanity will find cure for cancer, aids and probably more diseases will appear but it will be a lot of easier to heal them this hypothesis of mine, also includes improving basic human conditions, implementing new ways of recycling and healing. Those changes in my opinion are most likely to occur, and are most important for our civilization, i belive many changes are already being processed right now, most of 21 century is already a technological wonder from this aspect, so, eventually this is the century that will change everything.
I would like to conclude my essay with a quote - "Unless humanity gives top priority itself, there will be no future
for the humanity!" and i fully agree, we need to invest in humanity, in it's values, we need to preserve things that make
us humans, but to move forward it's the final goal. 21 Century is promising, and it's depending on us, we need to save our future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82227488152 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63830634568 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.7632556611 48.9658058833 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1333333333 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231306014117 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987228052333 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704189826701 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945864492375 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749844249965 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.