People have a lot of opinions about the value of advanced education. Which do you think is the most important reason to attend college or university? Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our modern society is based on competition and it is important to be the most qualified in your own domain to achieve any significant results. A good education is essential to build a prosperous career, and nowadays people attend universities and higher class education to be able to achieve their dreams, I think the most important reason is qualification and I will explain my opinion in the following essay.
First of all, our society nowadays is based on competition, graduation rate is higher and people who are qualified and studied in prestigious universities tend to receive the best offers in order to build their careers. For example, I had a good friend who studied very hard and even though he studied hard when he told everyone he was applying to Harvard everybody laugh, but he actually managed to receive an official invite he studied even harder and in final he received a brilliant characteristic and diploma, moreover he received offers to work with international known companies, and he accepted. This proves that a university and a good study diploma can be very important in your future career perspectives, this only proves my point that advanced education has a very high value.
Second of all, higher education – higher qualification on the working market, people tend to hire specialists who have a good working portfolio or had an internship in a company or working place, universities provide those possibilities. Furthermore universities while you study provide you different offers from companies that gives you the most valuable experience. For example, while I was studying at my university I received a internship at General Motors, when I started to work at that place I received more valuable experience that was noticed from my internship company that they were trying to hire me after I finish my studies. Moreover they provided me with a opportunity to pay for my studies in order to work for them, I agreed. This not only proves my point but presents a important truth – if you want to have a future, a safer way is always advanced education.
In conclusion I think the most important reason is the possibilities that a advanced education provides you. I think it’s important today to attend to a university or a college to built your career and to establish
your future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96299676998 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470437017995 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6501258759 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.083333333 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4166666667 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20413598207 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103156408972 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893891934155 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175864114793 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119306074628 0.0645574589148 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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