In many parts of the world, majority of the students are not taking science as their major subject. As the teenagers are not taking science, it would create lot of problems to the future development of society. Here I would address both the causes and remedies for the problem.
First and foremost, science is a demanding subject, the reason why most of the students do not take it. Because this subject requires a lot of hardwork and consumes much time and energy for completion of the projects. A survey conducted in 2011, in UK reported that stress is the preliminary source that is making the students not to opt for science as a major subject. However, they also suggested that proper stress management programs would help the students to deal with stress.
Secondly, as most of the students are not opting for science, it would not fill all the vacancies in a specialised post and so there will not be enough manpower to craft creative ideas, which will make the mankind suffer in future. Besides, most of the students who are not interested to work hard had chosen easier subjects like arts and management courses, which would imbalance the demand supply ratio in that particular field.
I conclude that stress is the major option for students not taking science as a major subject and proper scheduled counselling from experts would help the students to deal with the stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48162870701 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.924843515 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218399595418 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958777810396 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447745799642 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139662476088 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405046855649 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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