In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
The statement is quite tricky as it mentions the minimal role of government in private business matters. I strongly agree with the statement as the statement doesn't say that the government should have no role at all, rather the word minimal is used. Government is a ruling body whose goal should always be inclined towards the betterment of the people of the city or a country. It should facilitate private businesses with great care. Unfortunately, in the current world, most of the governments imply sever rules and restrictions on the small and private business owners that the survival of the people has become tougher.
Every government has to set rules and regulations on various businesses as the chance of corruption and illegal businesses can rise had there been no restrictions on them. This, in turn, hampers the progress of several honest business owners who work hard to make their living. This has become a serious problem in the recent past as numerous people find it difficult to maintain their small businesses due to severe restrictions that had been applied to them. The government should be very critical about how the rules are implemented and should also focus on evaluating the legal and illegal businesses and apply restrictions on them accordingly. Eventually, the innocent people will be relieved of the sufferings and the small private businesses would thrive.
By facilitating, I mean the government should make the business easier rather than just ignoring it completely. Tax should be reduced to the extent that the people should not have difficulties making a living out of it. transportation facilities should be accessible to each and every one.
There would be instances when the involvement of government is necessary for the proper functioning of the businesses such as making sure there is not any corruption amongst the business owners and in some cases-solving the dispute amongst people. The level of involvement should always be checked and analyzed and unnecessary involvement could only act as a hindrance.
In a nutshell, I would re-assert my point that the government should play as minimal a role in private businesses as possible in order to let the people benefit from their continuous hard work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ree with the statement as the statement doesnt say that the government should have no ...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...tion facilities should be accessible to each and every one. There would be instances when the in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, so, as to, i mean, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14480874317 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90912790582 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494535519126 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5636822053 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6875 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468180324991 0.243740707755 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163610442696 0.0831039109588 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10141170712 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25802410711 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100019122056 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.