Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem you had while while visiting one of their stores. In your letter include:
- why the problem was
- why this problem has upset you
- what you want to happen as a result of your letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the manner in which you stage your product. Allow me to elaborate on.
Last Sunday, while shopping at your Landmark Building, I noticed that your digital center was playing an extremely graphic movie to demonstrate the visual capability of a new television model. Moreover, the day I was in your store, my children were exposed to the violence that you allowed to be screened. I am aware children are not your company's target, but you have to acknowledge that they do visit your stores regularly with their parents.
My kids revealed they were very shocked by experiencing that violent content. Thus, I trust you can empathize with my situation. I am expecting you to take immediate action by changing the material you use in your displays. Furthermore, I am hoping you to reprimand the members of your team responsible for allowing such an oversight to happen.
Your timely attention to this matter is needed.
Haki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88439306358 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69210306106 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658959537572 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.714148845 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251169203766 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098496041518 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577622067048 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147886502816 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465058288863 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.