City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost. Why has this happened and how to solve this problem?
In this age of change, human society has been progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet the relationship between individuals has become estranged. In spite of talking to their neighbors, individuals tent to remain in their own home to avoid direct contract with others. This issue has raised the attention of many countries worldwide. This this essay, I will demonstrate the possible reasons that contribute to this problem.
First of all, the lack of security is a crucial fact of the alienation between people. To be specific, humanity living under the stress of modern society is suffering from...
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