You ordered a new chequebook from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the chequebook. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express dissatisfaction towards the service of your financial institution.
Let me explain you in more detail. I am Tim Frank, account holder of Fort Branch from last fifteen years and account number is 91362. When I visited the bank on 20th August 2019, I have ordered the cheque book after filling the necessary forms and handed over to the clerk in person.
Now two weeks has been passed but till today, I have neither received the cheque booklet which was requisite nor any message from your side for delay.
This is the issue which I has happened for the first time and am very disappointed with this service. I have to pay some bills which are on due through cheque. I would request you to let me know , how much time it will take more to get it delivered?. Also, I would be oblige if you look into this matter and take action on it.
I will waiting for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Tim Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...for delay. This is the issue which I has happened for the first time and am very...
^^^
Line 9, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eque. I would request you to let me know , how much time it will take more to get ...
^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'wait'
Suggestion: wait
...matter and take action on it. I will waiting for your response. Yours faithfully,...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34429917808 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3497831427 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5454545455 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233067189706 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768194192663 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467973819356 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107637961878 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363754463533 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.