You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Dear Sir
I’m writing to inform you my last order which is a cheque book from your bank.I have been using these bank almost two years. However. Until the this month everything was a perfect for me.Thus, I hope you will fix my problem.First of all, I want to explain in my situation. Im working as a manager due the making payment is vital for me.Therefore, two books ago when I was a called your bank I worn them about this delivery time.Even so this action I have to be still wait to this order.
Therefore, according to me you be able to arrange this problem.And the other hands, because of your fault I don’t want to pay for delivery.It should be covered from bank.And also in this time you should send to me express delivery and please let me know how long I have to be wait for new book.As i wrote before, the prevent to my business please take your responsibility seriously.
I’m waiting to your answer and your action for solution.
Yours faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
...r which is a cheque book from your bank.I have been using these bank almost two y...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...been using these bank almost two years. However. Until the this month everything was a ...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...e bank almost two years. However. Until the this month everything was a perfect for me.T...
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Suggestion: Thus
...s month everything was a perfect for me.Thus, I hope you will fix my problem.First o...
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Suggestion: First
...me.Thus, I hope you will fix my problem.First of all, I want to explain in my situati...
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Suggestion: I'm
...all, I want to explain in my situation. Im working as a manager due the making pay...
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... due the making payment is vital for me.Therefore, two books ago when I was a called your...
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...nk I worn them about this delivery time.Even so this action I have to be still wait ...
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Suggestion: And
... me you be able to arrange this problem.And the other hands, because of your fault ...
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...t I don't want to pay for delivery.It should be covered from bank.And also in...
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Suggestion: And
...delivery.It should be covered from bank.And also in this time you should send to me...
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Suggestion: As
...how long I have to be wait for new book.As i wrote before, the prevent to my busin...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... long I have to be wait for new book.As i wrote before, the prevent to my busines...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...be wait for new book.As i wrote before, the prevent to my business please take your respons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, still, therefore, thus, even so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60898796123 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 16.3608247423 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.476171497 44.8134815571 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.2 76.5299724578 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.2 16.8248392259 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.2 4.34317383033 327% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28403289976 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138403598181 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845220464296 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1754548801 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877143781899 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 8.37731958763 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 8.54432989691 187% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.