Dear Sir,
I am Monica Geller, I hope you remember me from our last meeting. I hope you are doing fine. Last week we met on a flight from Paris to Lille. You discussed about your restaurant in Metz, which was inaugurated a month ago and have a vacancy for a managerial role. I would like to apply for the same.
I am currently employed in a three-star hotel in Nantes as a manager. I've been working here since November 2015, which is almost 4 years. I'm in charge of Clients events & also involved in handling finance for the branch in Nantes. I'm pretty happy about my job, but I'm looking for change which will help me gain some exposure and a boost in my career. From an education point of view, I have pursued a degree in Hotel Management from Italy and have a certificate in safety and hygiene, which could be helpful for your restaurant.
I would really love to work in your restaurant as a restaurant manager, as I would gain some experience and in return would contribute towards your restaurants objective. I look forward to your response.
Sincerely,
Monica Geller
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...dling finance for the branch in Nantes. Im pretty happy about my job, but Im looki...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60621761658 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60666285757 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5612289192 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086090925901 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319021205689 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414210270643 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609819707582 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436176814373 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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