Journalism is a job which is related to sociological and psychological branches. This extensiveness makes it more debatable and dangerous around the world. I assume journalism as a valuable job because of taken risks to deliver the truth to people.
Generally, there are loyal and disloyal journalists like in every job categories. Because of the presence of disloyal ones, loyal journalists face lots of difficulties coming from these malevolent people. Moreover, these "bad persons" try to prevent loyal one's studies and works to hinder the delivering of true news to society. For example, there are lots of kind of speculations about innocent and weak people; however, when trustworthy employees prepare some news about these persons, they encounter with a barrier of unreliable ones who are employed and "bought" by other strong and bad people.
On the other hand, there are lethal and vital dangers to "good men" rather than being prevented. Unluckily, there are several journalists in prisons as a consequence of their rebellious behaviors and news about the dark side of the world and humanity. As we know, disgusting and dangerous jobs are being run by people as bad as these jobs such as drug trade and smuggling. While any journalist makes a new about these persons during the preparing process or after this news, they probably being assassinated or perished by the strong, rich, and bad people. Due to these risks, most journalists take the risk of being dead after any news toward the persons.
To sum up, journalism is one of the most dangerous and valuable jobs amongst other jobs because of being under the risk of prevented or assassinated by others. In my humble opinion, journalists will gain more value due to the honourable history of journalists.
- In some countries it is legal for citizens to carry firearms for self-defense purposes. In your opinion, should every country in the world make it legal for their citizens to carry firearms for self-defense purposes? 70
- In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why? 80
- Team sports are general promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead 77
- Journalism is one of the most difficult jobs in the world. What’s your opinion? 77
- Some people believe that building unattractive houses should be prohibited because they are exposed to the public. What is your opinion about this? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks delivering'.
Suggestion: risks delivering
...lism as a valuable job because of taken risks to deliver the truth to people. Generally, there...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of kinds'.
Suggestion: lots of kinds
...news to society. For example, there are lots of kind of speculations about innocent and weak...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, kind of, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20618556701 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95987422803 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3824242217 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222984712663 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792784279318 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554740426159 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150063220358 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441285835627 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.