In these days, different types of diets and exercises are very popular amongst people. Most of the people have some ideas about these exercises' and diets' benefits. In this paper, I will evaluate both types of ideas about them which can cause some debates from time to time.
First and foremost, some people assume that exercises are more beneficial than balanced diets. As we see from the people preferences, there are different types of diets which are applied by people to get a healthy body. These people claim that all of these diets are not beneficial to people. Moreover, they think that just exercises should be applied by people because of the regular movements of bodies. For example, women prefer to utilize from recent diet programs to get the desired shape in a short period; however, they cannot achieve it because of not having an appropriate exercise plan to work out.
On the other hand, another type of people adds that having a balanced diet is more advantageous than exercises. In that point, they claim that a balanced diet must be there if anyone wants to be healthy because of the natural influences of the foods what we eat. Furthermore, they think that bodies are affecting by foods all of the time regarding healthy or unhealthy food items. For instance, if someone eats unhealthy foods, this person cannot be healthy as he does not break this type of eating.
To sum up, people find exercises or healthy diets as a good way to be healthy. In my opinion, people should be precise and meticulous about both to get what they deserve because two of them play a crucial role in health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...hink that bodies are affecting by foods all of the time regarding healthy or unhealthy foo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72953736655 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36076407679 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516014234875 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3995600606 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258829435465 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103497894699 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679366050971 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161843699346 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312782617329 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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