Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...ou use the internet, you will not force to go out to do grocery shopping, go to bank,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for instance, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 530.0 1977.66487455 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 135.0 407.700716846 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.92592592593 4.8611393121 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 4.48103885553 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24193723794 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 212.727598566 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 618.680645161 28% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 15.7194796611 48.9658058833 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7142857143 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107898729349 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481205003422 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425214238196 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107898729349 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.51 10.9000537634 51% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 86.8835125448 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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