We live in a dangerous era for all of us regarding safety. However, some areas are more dangerous than in other areas. Because of the lack of safety, people need to take some precautions to estimate this safety for their own and family's lives and honor. One of the solutions for it is to carry firearms. In this essay, I will give my opinion of both the pros and cons of it.
Unfortunately, lots of people are dying due to the lack of self-defense ways. Towards this danger, people feel that they have to do something to save their lives. One of the reasons for this feeling is a lack of government's cares and insufficient laws to give punishments to criminals and save the rights of innocent people. For example, especially in developing countries, several events are deriving from terrorism in rural areas which there is no sufficient police officer. Thus, people need to carry guns to kill in the name of self-defense if these terrorists come to kill them instantly.
On the other hand, carrying personal firearms can more lethal than not to carry if it is not ruled and controlled by the government. As stated above, people cannot get enough safety from the government in developing countries. Moreover, in these countries, governments not only not be able to control the presence of criminal people but also illegal firearms. For example, people can easily abuse the lack of consideration of governs to get firearms illegally. Hence, these illegal weapons can be used for crimes such as killing other people because of revenge rather than defense themselves.
As a conclusion, carrying firearms can be vital to defense; moreover, it can be used for illegal purposes. To avoid confusion, rule of laws must be improved to secure justice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88552188552 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73860140365 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9177715205 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3529411765 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250107456626 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832795170168 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637889589268 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154800217709 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215375926746 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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