Team sports are very popular amongst popular from children to elders. Normally, it affects people's mindsets and psychological situations according to their levels of love or addiction. At some points, people become very harmful and they show unreasonable behaviors due to their favorite teams' loses or earnings.
Unfortunately, most of the fans of team sports, especially football fans, show some exaggerated behaviors as a result of these teams' results achieved from sports games. Suddenly people can become a very different person than their previous situations. For example, most of the people prefer to swear opposite football team when their favorite team feeling belong to loses a match. They need to say very bad and insulting words to represent their fear and fury. This is one of the bad incomes of the excitement resulting from football matches.
As an addition to the first detrimental side, a group of people feels critically belong and addicted to their favorite teams. Strangely, they need to be addicted to these teams to be enough loyal fans of the teams. They do not prefer to show their loyalty and love to teams without being addicted in an unhealthy way. For instance, some conflicts in families occur during the representation of football matches on televisions because of a lack of communication during that. There may be limited time to spend time with each other as a family; however, the addicted person can choose to spend his or her time with the television instead of the family.
To sum up, team sports bring about some dangerous behaviors and situations such as swearing and being addicted. In my opinion, there must be more psychological researching and help about this problem to understand and solve that wisely and deeply to overcome these common attributes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'lose'.
Suggestion: lose
...n their favorite team feeling belong to loses a match. They need to say very bad and ...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unhealthy way" with adverb for "unhealthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd love to teams without being addicted in an unhealthy way. For instance, some conflicts in famili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73407614778 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6999839897 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122115587211 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042819017448 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471381398796 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788526605719 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151825248698 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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