The figure given here illustrates the steps involved in the production and recycling of glass containers and bottles. It involves a series of complicated steps and controlled conditions to produce glass bottles and also to recycle them.
Firstly, the procedure involves the mixing of sand, soda ash and limestone with some other chemicals which are then melted at approximately 1500 degree celsius temperature in a glass furnace. The molten glass is then moulded into shape by blowing which results in a perfectly shaped glass container.
For recycling glass, the utilised glass materials are to be collected and sorted according to colour. After sorting, they are washed to remove any impure materials present on them. Before moulding them, they are crushed and melted to form new products such as glass bottles.
To conclude, the production of glass bottles involves mixing, crushing and moulding, while recycling requires collection, washing, crushing and melting.
- It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to theavailability of fast food. Should governments place a tax on fast food to reducethe amount of fast food consumed? 61
- The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree? 56
- Both the rich and the poor find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- The graph below shows the percentage change in the nubmer of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.-alam-(re-write) 67
- A persons worth now a days is judges according to material possessions and social status. Old fashioned values seems no longer i,portmanteaus. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71149815088 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7266122669 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1650826198 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078412280642 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474760555098 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959867934123 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403923097144 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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