Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, we see there are so many varieties of animals being domesticated by the people, not only they are treated as family member but people have love them and take care of them as their own children.I being a animal lover strongly agree with these relationships and I feel these are some of the best relationship somebody can have. Below are the few reasons why I think so.
Firstly, Pets work as stress busters. In daily day to day life, people come across many types of stress like work stress, family stress, emotional stress, etc. When we come home just imagine having somebody who is excited to see you and who you know was waiting for you. The thought is enough for us to be happy. This is a different experience all together and also help as stress buster.
Secondly, Nowadays even medical therapist are suggesting people to have pets, who in particular going through depression. These pets are of great help to such patients and also help them recover soon, also become an important part of the patients life. For example, one of my friends was going through depression because of her divorce. Her therapist suggest here get a pet and she got a dog for herself and this helped her in healing soon and now she is ready to face the world again.
Lastly, pets help in security and more than often help in protecting you. There are minion of stories who animals save life of their owner by guiding them or by saving them other threats like rubbers and all. Animals are loyal to their owners and will love them back in any way possible. For example recently in news there was a viral news that, owners child was protected by the pet dog from a snake. Many such stories are available today.
In conclusion, I thinks its a great thing to have a special relationship with pet animals. It also help animals as they get love, care from the owner and owner in return get much more back. I strongly believe given a chance everyone should have a pet as it will make your life better in many ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in particular, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54246575342 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27135350077 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550684931507 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2094430903 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2631578947 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198908589757 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525962716069 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604846741712 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112905509934 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866370487664 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.