Should the government make decisions about people’s lifestyle, should people make their own decision.
Government, as a whole, have different responsibilities to make people more secure and more prosperous.in my opinion people have right to choose their lifestyle, while some government interferes to this decision. In this essay, I will discuss both views.
To begin with, there is still dictatorship exist around the globe which governs the nation. In this type, the government put some rules for people. For instance, in Iran, people should wear scar while they are going out or even they couldn’t install a satellite dish which helps them to watch more channels across the globe. Also, when ISIs came to power, they force their children to go to their designated school, which are run by this course. Besides, men should have bears and a lot of rules which bound people’s freedom. So if the government have no principal rules for human right according to the United Nations statement, they force their people.
On the flip side, in western countries the government helps people to promote their rights for freedom. Nowadays, many mosques, churches and temples have been built to show diversity. While you are walking in the street, you will see different people with different style, and no one couldn’t dominate their belief to others. Besides, government mainly immigrant countries helps people to choose their land and live according to their belief. For instance, if you are gay or lesbian, in these countries you could marry and live comfortably. So, people become empower if government facilitate its ground for living.
All in all, government should do their principal roles which are making a job and promoting healthcare. So that if people have to obey the government rules for living in the country, it won't give them the freedom to live freely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12027491409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67429030351 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4366715678 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319067157466 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101560533584 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780919240262 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203935771128 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241830986261 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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