Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems
is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is believed that the only and possible solution to bring down the damage that is being done to the environment can be decreased only by means of rising taxes and prices on private vehicles such as cars and vehicles which run on fuel or gases. I completely agree with this statement because this is the all in all solution for bringing down damage causing to the mother nature.
To begin with, owners of cars and bikes only desire that where ever they go they just depend on their vehicle to commute in own street itself, the habit of walking a while has abolished from people's mind due to the availability of vehicles and ownerships of vehicles. these engines which they use to commute emit lot of harmful gases and smoke which is causing our territory detrimental damage and unfortunately it is irreversible, no person is thinking twice before going to a shop which is just in another street on their bike causing emissions damaging environs. For example, a state like Delhi has ranked 2nd in most polluted cities as per WHO for the year 2018-19. Abode is getting damaged by the emission of harmful gases and fumes from these vehicles.
On the other hand, if the Government raises taxes on these vehicles and uses these funds to provide better public transport facilities it makes citizens transit through it would save a lot of habitat from damaging and prevents unnecessary costs. Increased prices on vehicles decrease sales and encourage everyone to commute through government-provided environmental friendly transport.
In conclusion, it would be a better place to live for everyone where the environment is protected and saved, we have polluted enough and damaged our mother nature. Now, let's take a step towards using habitat-friendly vehicles and conserve the earth. Although people understand the seriousness behind this damage they should consider using environmental friendly vehicles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is believed that the only and possible ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...of vehicles and ownerships of vehicles. these engines which they use to commute emit ...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...s of vehicles. these engines which they use to commute emit lot of harmful gases an...
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Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...iendly vehicles and conserve the earth. Although people understand the seriousness behin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09904153355 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79424708255 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8442631936 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.090909091 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0980417632811 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401827831108 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243592065581 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580435545369 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00822765650408 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.